This is my dragon albert.He is four years old. The dragoon lives in the forest of an island. He is of green colour with red spots. He con fly with its two wings. He can fly very high. He is very great. He has got a rapero cap. He has got a long neck. He has got a very long tail. He can walk. He can' t cooking in the kitchen. He can't swimming. He can fly for. He hasn' t got a computer and play station. He can't ski. He can' t drive a car. He can' t to the cinema. He has got two friends. The castle is very great. He can eating ice cream. He can go to the hairdressing salon.He has the very great fingers. He has the small arms. It does not have eyebrows. He has the very great feet. He not wear shoes. It has very small lips. Their lips are of red color. Their feet are of green color.
David, 12 years.
3 comments:
david tienes una falta en la primera linea a la palabra 12 no es dragoon si no dragon
Tens una falta a la primera linia, as posat he is per l'edat i es he has.
Adéu
Hello david tienes una falta en la segunda linea en vez de he con fly es he can fly
dew
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